Masks Paragraph & Minecraft Paragraph Reflection. By: AdamL.

I wrote a blog post at the beginning of grade 5 about wearing MASKS(<– POST) during Covid. Recently, I wrote a blog post about MINECRAFT EDUCATION EDITION(<– POST). Firstly, I think my masks paragraph was less organized. It was shorter and less detailed as well. It didn’t have any pictures, unlike my Minecraft blog post that included a picture and some links. My Minecraft blog post was more organized and included more detail. Overall, I think my Minecraft paragraph was much better than my Masks paragraph. For my future blog posts I will include more pictures, details, and links to help my readers understand more about what I’m writing about.

One Comment

  1. I love that you took the time to reflect on your posts, now that you are getting into the rhythm of blogging. As someone who writes and reads a lot of blogs, I agree that pictures, videos, links, etc., definitely make the experience better for your readers. And it is part of what makes blogging different than just writing…

    Do you think your Minecraft post was easier to write because you have a passion for it? And if so…are there any tricks that you can apply to topics that you might be less…er…passionate about?

    🙂

    Keep up the great work!

    Doc

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